A better approach to college essay review

Get detailed college essay feedback from an admissions expert in as little as 2 hours.

From grammar and syntax to the strength of the topic, expert reviewers on CollegeVine are thorough in helping your voice stand out and write essays that actually resonate with admissions officers.

Get started
Essay: One day, while the nurse was administering back injections, she asked me to hold a patient’s hand to soothe her. As she trembled from the injections In doing so, I began to see just how much difficulty patients underwent (crossed out) endured, from their medical issues and even treatments. Response by Vinay: Can you make this more "in the moment"? You jumped from a specific example to a general statement about your experience. It would be more effective to continue with the specific example.
Experts that specialize in 650+ schools
Affordable, high quality reviews, starting at $70
Get your essay back in as little as 2 hours

Find the perfect reviewer for you

CollegeVine is home to the largest marketplace of admissions experts. Choose from advisors with diverse backgrounds, areas of expertise, services, price points, and return times.

View all

What families are saying

Adrian Russian
This review was amazing!! Adrian provided thorough feedback, and now I know how to move forward with my essay. Thank you :)
Divya A.
Lydia Schooler
Thank you Lydia for the very helpful review and timely feedback. The comments and suggestions were very detailed and constructive and helped throughout the editing process. Thank you for taking the extra time to clarify questions and help explain any unclear items.
Lauren R.
Zoe Posner
Zoe did an amazing job providing input on my essay. Feedback regarding composition, flow and sentence structure were extremely helpful. Very happy to have used Zoe and would recommend her highly!
T J.

We make it easy to get a fast, professional essay review

1
Search for advisors based on multiple price points, return times, and areas of expertise
2
Submit your essay
3
Get detailed feedback with inline edits
4
Submit as many times as you want
My essays: Common App Personal Essay. Short response essay. Overall feedback from Vinay: Thanks for sharing your essay with me! I can see that you’ve put a lot of thought into the ‘If I were…’ framework to show the reader sides of yourself. I especially enjoyed the reference

It’s easy to find an advisor who specializes in your dream school

  • University of Michigan
  • University of Pennsylvania
  • Harvard University
  • New York University
  • Cornell University
  • Stanford University
  • Brown University
  • University of Texas at Austin
  • Columbia University
  • Yale University
  • Duke University
  • University of North Carolina at chapel Hill
  • Princeton University
  • University of Southern California
  • University of California Los Angeles
  • Purdue University
  • University of California Berkeley
  • University of Virginia
  • Georgia Institute of Technology
  • University of Illinois at Urbana Champaign
  • Boston University
  • Northwestern University
  • Vanderbilt University
  • Northeastern University
  • Johns Hopkins University
  • Carnegie Mellon University
  • University of Miami
  • University of Florida
  • Pennsylvania State University
  • Rice University
  • Ohio State University
  • University of Wisconsin Madison
  • Dartmouth College
  • Massachusetts Institute of Technology
  • University of Maryland College Park
  • University of Washington
  • University of Chicago
  • University of California San Diego
  • Texas A M University
  • Emory University

Other essay resources on CollegeVine

Extracurricular Short Response. Not required. 150 Words. Your intellectual life may extend beyond the academic requirements of your particular school. Please use the space below to list additional intellectual activities that you have not mentioned or detailed elsewhere in your application. These could include, but are not limited to, supervised or self-directed projects not done as school work, training experiences, online courses not run by your school, or summer academic or research programs not described elsewhere. Read our essay guide to get started.

Essay prompts & guides

At CollegeVine, our goal is to make the college application process a little less stressful, so we’ve compiled the latest essay prompts for the top 100 schools in one easy, searchable database.

Explore essay prompt database
What am I missing in the essay? When you read it, can you please let me know. Essay: “Society is like a beehive; uniformly buzzing, remodeling, and merely dying for approval granted by their queen be…”

Review a peer essay

Build confidence and improve your own writing by reviewing peer essays. Get into the mindset of a reader trying to understand the writer, just like an admissions officer.

Differentiating yourself is more important than ever

With more schools going test-optional, college essays can help you stand out from the rest, and they can often make the difference between rejection and acceptance.

Essays are 35% of your application

Grades alone won’t get you accepted to your dream school. The college essay is an extremely important piece of your college application. Essays help you stand out from the rest.

Show your personality

Admissions officers want to better understand who you are through your essays. Showcasing your unique view of the world and the experiences that have led you to where you are is pivotal.

Become memorable to admissions

Admissions officers only spend a few minutes on each application. Ensure your essay will be memorable by getting honest feedback from people who don’t already know your story well.

Get started

Missing API endpoint:

The client-side code needs access to API endpoint , but it wasn't defined.

Did you forget to call the client_side_endpoints helper?